Self reflection for report

Hi guys today I am blogging something I am very very  proud of.  It is my self reflection for my report, that is why I am blogging it, this is one of my best writing so far. My other one is free choice writing. I was so proud of that, it is on my blog too. Check it out. Here is my self reflection.

Enjoy!! 

Self-Reflection

What has been your highlight of the year so far?  Passion project because it is rally rally fun to do and work on and  I  try to do my best. 

What license do you think you are on and why? I think I  am on my strieder license because I do not ask for help when learning gets tough.

What are you like as a learning buddy?  I think that I am a good learning buddy because I help my buddy when he needs it. I in to work on setting next to my buddy.

What is your favourite subject and why? Art because it is so much fun to do and funny when you get paint on you.  

What learning muscle have you been focussed on this year? I have been focussed on my Empathy and Absorption, those are two big ones for me. 

What is it like so far in Rimu Hub? I love it in Rimu hub because the teachers make the learning tasks fun and Funday but I have only been to Funday once.

What is you your favourite learning space and why? The quiet room because it is quiet to work in and is easy to focus.  

free choice writing.

Hi guys today I am bogging my free choice writing with you because I am proud of it and it my personal best it took me a long time because I wanted it to be my best so it can move me up a level in writing. 
Here is my free choice writing and the criteria.  
Free Choice Writing- Sage

Persuade, Entertain or Inform?

I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.

You choose the topic and you choose the writing purpose. This needs to be your best independent writing for assessment. Below is the success criteria for quality writing. Use this criteria and go for it!

Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas	Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation	Include simple, compound and complex sentences Start most of my sentences with different words
Vocabulary	Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Structure	Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
Spelling	My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Punctuation	Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.

Sweet sweet treats

Sweet candy facts.

Candy is sweet because of the sugar inside of the candy there is lots and lots of sugar that is way it is so so sweet and most people like candy just because it taste nice and is sweet. The people who like candy most is kids because it is really really taste nice and is sweet.       

Sour candy facts.

Some candy is sour like topstick wats it is a really really sour candy but if you like sour stuff like I do it should be nice and then there is sweet sour candy like sour patch kids by that I mean it is sour and sweet at the same time. My favorite sour candy is sour patch kids what one is yous?

Sweet and sour facts that they share.    

Sweet and sour candy have fat in them and sugar in and some have it on them as will as in them that is what makes the candy yummy and sweet. But on candy is heavy.           

  

learning muscles

In rimu hub we have learning muscles. My learning muscles I am working on are absorption and planning. There are lots of awesome learning muscles my favourite one is perseverance. Here is all the learning muscles.

   

Postcard People

Congratulations to all those people who have got a postcard I think you have really deserved it and the year fours must of done well to get a postcard. Once every week 3 people get a postcard on Friday it is very exciting because it is not just year six who get the postcard you get your picture taken. The postcard is so so so special. Here are all the people who got a postcard so far. Congratulations. 

maths workshop prove it

In class we have been doing workshop prove its in class today I am shewing you my maths workshop prove it. This is how it works we go to a workshop on what we need to what it is or how to do it sometimes both than you have to prove it. Hare is my last week maths workshop pove it. 

Workshop Prove It

I learnt what is estimating and how do you do it.

Here is an example: I guessed I am one metre and a half tall. It is the same as an estimate.  

my holidays

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In the holiday I went to the movies with my nana we watched Zootopia. It was very exciting I could not wait. We had popcorn and pizza the movie was so cool but scary in some parts when animals went savage. When the movie finished we went into the game room and played a ball shooting game  and a cordle game. My fave character  is Judy Hops. Here are some pictures  

Hare is Judy Hops.  

Hare is Nick Wild. 

iProud 1

I am blogging this because it is my personal best and I am proud of it.  

My Best Learning

This is my camp letter .

Sue

Hastings

Dear Sue,

Thank you so much for taking time off work and away from your family thank you for being on the river walk with us. I appreciate it.

It was fun on the river walk with you. I like how you helped us when we needed it especially in the strong current. I liked how you kept on encouraging us to move when the river got tough. My favorite part of the river walk was being able to float. Thank you for helping us on the river walk.  

My favorite time with you was when you helped us through the strong current it was hard to keep my balance and still fun. My favorite part of camp was playing spotlight because it was fun but scary when the finder would came to look. My favorite activity was the pool making because it was fun and I enjoyed it so so much when I got wet.  

Yours sincerely,

From Sage

I am proud of this because I took my time and it is better than I expected.  

My biggest challenge was selling my words creatively.