Wednesday, June 29, 2016

Self reflection for report

Hi guys today I am blogging something I am very very  proud of.  It is my self reflection for my report, that is why I am blogging it, this is one of my best writing so far. My other one is free choice writing. I was so proud of that, it is on my blog too. Check it out. Here is my self reflection.



What has been your highlight of the year so far?  Passion project because it is rally rally fun to do and work on and  I  try to do my best. 

What license do you think you are on and why? I think I  am on my strieder license because I do not ask for help when learning gets tough.

What are you like as a learning buddy?  I think that I am a good learning buddy because I help my buddy when he needs it. I in to work on setting next to my buddy.

What is your favourite subject and why? Art because it is so much fun to do and funny when you get paint on you.  

What learning muscle have you been focussed on this year? I have been focussed on my Empathy and Absorption, those are two big ones for me. 

What is it like so far in Rimu Hub? I love it in Rimu hub because the teachers make the learning tasks fun and Funday but I have only been to Funday once.

What is you your favourite learning space and why? The quiet room because it is quiet to work in and is easy to focus.  

Sunday, June 19, 2016

free choice writing.

Hi guys today I am bogging my free choice writing with you because I am proud of it and it my personal best it took me a long time because I wanted it to be my best so it can move me up a level in writing. 
Here is my free choice writing and the criteria.  
Free Choice Writing- Sage

Persuade, Entertain or Inform?
I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.
You choose the topic and you choose the writing purpose. This needs to be your best independent writing for assessment. Below is the success criteria for quality writing. Use this criteria and go for it!

Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas
Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation
  • Include simple, compound and complex sentences
  • Start most of my sentences with different words
Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.

Sweet sweet treats
Sweet candy facts.
Candy is sweet because of the sugar inside of the candy there is lots and lots of sugar that is way it is so so sweet and most people like candy just because it taste nice and is sweet. The people who like candy most is kids because it is really really taste nice and is sweet.       

Sour candy facts.
Some candy is sour like topstick wats it is a really really sour candy but if you like sour stuff like I do it should be nice and then there is sweet sour candy like sour patch kids by that I mean it is sour and sweet at the same time. My favorite sour candy is sour patch kids what one is yous?

Sweet and sour facts that they share.    
Sweet and sour candy have fat in them and sugar in and some have it on them as will as in them that is what makes the candy yummy and sweet. But on candy is heavy.           


Wednesday, June 15, 2016

learning muscles

In rimu hub we have learning muscles. My learning muscles I am working on are absorption and planning. There are lots of awesome learning muscles my favourite one is perseverance. Here is all the learning muscles.