free choice writing.

Hi guys today I am bogging my free choice writing with you because I am proud of it and it my personal best it took me a long time because I wanted it to be my best so it can move me up a level in writing. 
Here is my free choice writing and the criteria.  
Free Choice Writing- Sage

Persuade, Entertain or Inform?

I am learning to communicate my ideas effectively to the reader.

You choose the topic and you choose the writing purpose. This needs to be your best independent writing for assessment. Below is the success criteria for quality writing. Use this criteria and go for it!

Success Criteria (Sentence formation has been our main focus)
Content & Ideas	Include a range of ideas with clear details.
Sentence Formation	Include simple, compound and complex sentences Start most of my sentences with different words
Vocabulary	Choose words and language features to meet my purpose.
Structure	Clear beginning, middle and end with paragraphs.
Spelling	My best spelling with good attempts at words I don’t know.
Punctuation	Use all basic punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks) correctly and attempt some complex punctuation.

Sweet sweet treats

Sweet candy facts.

Candy is sweet because of the sugar inside of the candy there is lots and lots of sugar that is way it is so so sweet and most people like candy just because it taste nice and is sweet. The people who like candy most is kids because it is really really taste nice and is sweet.       

Sour candy facts.

Some candy is sour like topstick wats it is a really really sour candy but if you like sour stuff like I do it should be nice and then there is sweet sour candy like sour patch kids by that I mean it is sour and sweet at the same time. My favorite sour candy is sour patch kids what one is yous?

Sweet and sour facts that they share.    

Sweet and sour candy have fat in them and sugar in and some have it on them as will as in them that is what makes the candy yummy and sweet. But on candy is heavy.